Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Media
coverage gives adverse
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an adverse
effect
on offspring around the world due to Fix the agreement mistake
effects
children
can influence effortlesssly
. More and more think that Correct your spelling
effortlessly
children
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repercussions
media
focus of renowed
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renewed
Therefore
, I strongly agree with this
statement and this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To commence with, media
and television always give repercussion on children
becuase
they cannot think too much like youth, Correct your spelling
because
therefore
, many television focus only offspring
and they telecast many Change preposition
on offspring
program
for offsprings. Change to a plural noun
programs
For instance
, many Indian channel
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channels
such
as Sutti TV. In addition
, offsprings focus can be diverted from academic to entertainment-related such
as recording Reels like well-known people, thus
, they might be affect
a negative side.
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affect
Furthermore
, since childhood period children
should be concenrated
on valuable things which Correct your spelling
concentrated
is
academic, skills and sports. These kinds of activities can only Change the verb form
are
getting
good lifestyle rather than addicted to watching renowned folks. Change the verb form
get
be getting
For instance
, a recent report from the Times of India said that more than 60% of the offspring cannot give a
full attention to Remove the article
apply
theirs
education due to celebrities influences. Correct the word
their
In addition
, media
attention not only distracts children
's education but also
reduces theirs
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their
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interest
towards
specific skills and Change preposition
in
sportrs
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sports
Therefore
, this
trend always provides more repercussion
on offspring.
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repercussions
media
attention always gives more adverse effects on children
in various ways. They can reduce theirs
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their
eduaction
level as well as specific talent too. Correct your spelling
education
Therefore
, I strongly agree with this
statement in-above mentioned details.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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