Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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coverage gives

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effect

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effects

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on offspring around the world due to

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can influence

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effortlessly

. More and more think that

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are having adverse

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media

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focus of

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renowned

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folks.

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statement and

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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with,

media

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and television always give repercussion on

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becuase

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because

they cannot think too much like youth,

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, many television focus only

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and they telecast many

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for offsprings.

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, many Indian

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channels

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telecast offsprings program for attracting countless babies

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as Sutti TV.

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, offsprings focus can be diverted from academic to entertainment-related

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as recording Reels like well-known people,

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, they might

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a negative side.

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, since childhood period

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should be

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concentrated

on valuable things which

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academic, skills and sports. These kinds of activities can only

getting

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good lifestyle rather than addicted to watching renowned folks.

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, a recent report from the Times of India said that more than 60% of the offspring cannot give

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full attention to

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education due to celebrities influences.

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attention not only distracts

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's education but

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reduces

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intrest

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interest

towards

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specific skills and

sportrs

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sports

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this

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trend always provides more

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repercussions

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on offspring. To conclude,

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attention always gives more adverse effects on

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in various ways. They can reduce

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their

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eduaction

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education

level as well as specific talent too.

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, I strongly agree with

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statement in-above mentioned details.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Celebrity culture
Glamorization
Unrealistic expectations
Self-esteem
Scandals
Role models
Moral development
Mental health
Influence
Exposure
Social media platforms
Charity work
Inappropriate behavior
Perfection image
Negative impact
Inspire children

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