In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,it is generally claimed that our dear planet, earth,is no longer a suitable place to live.

Therefore

,a common belief is that authorities should allocate a huge amount of money to space studies.Personally,I hold the opposite view and I entirely disagree with

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perspective.In the upcoming paragraphs,I will explain my point of view.

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of all,it is absolutely true that environmental degradation is happening at a rapid speed,

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as global warming.

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, governments can fix

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budget on the existing problems that we are facing on the earth.

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global warming by improving local transport systems.To exemplify,a recent study conducted in Canada declared that the emission of carbon dioxide which is produced by South Korea eliminated

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a considerable level due to renovation of their transportation.

Secondly

,powers from different regions of the world can control environmental issues by education,as a consequence, they should put more funding on raising

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awareness among citizens.To cue evidence, educational institutions should train young races in a way that

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will be beneficial for both their motherlands and the globe.

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, recently,in

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students learn how to use renewable energies rather than fossil fuels.To sum up, development in researching of our own planet can help us to prevail over those obstacles. To draw a conclusion, undoubtedly,men are continuously harming their living planet by their behaviours.

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,in my opinion, rather than spending more money on space exploration,we should come forward to employ funds on mitigating the existing drawbacks in the environment.

Thus

, saving the entire population of all creatures.