Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that students attitude is important. Discuss both views and give you’re opinion.

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The educational system around the world is made to take the maximum out of both, teachers and learners.
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some people argue that educational achievement depends
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on teachers, others are of the opinion that it is based on
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attribute. In
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I believe that
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play the main role in their own education. On the one hand, it is
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job to teach the
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in the most effective way they can and to
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encourage
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for
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education. Learners find it more enjoyable to study when they are already familiar with
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, there are many
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proving that
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interactive studying is much more efficient than passive, especially in
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capacity to memorize the material from the class. There are many ways of active teaching that are proved to be effective, including visual
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and brain maps,
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. The more effort a teacher makes, the easier it will be for
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to make progress.
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, if a
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is not willing to
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cooperate, a teacher is powerless.
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, it is not the job of the professor to force the
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to study and even if he would like to do so, it will
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, if the
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is ambitious and diligent, achieving
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educational success would be possible even without any effort
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the teacher. A great instance for
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self-education, where
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people around the world succeed in learning the languages or playing the instruments.
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, it all comes to a
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's approach to education and more importantly, his temperament. To sum up, having a great professor might encourage
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process of learning and vice versa, but
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it is the learner whose obligation is to work on their future.
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