Large public places such as parks and squares are essential in both citites and towns Do you agree or disagree?

Certainly, large public places like

parks

and squares are essential across all rural

areas

and considered as

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of the cities.

Therefore

, I entirely agree with the aforementioned notion because large public

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provide great value to both the towns and

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civilians. To commence with, public places

such

as

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parks

as well as gardens are very important for a society because it helps people to spend their quality time with their families and children.

For instance

, technology is increasing

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all over the world. So, everyone has a busy schedule and people are

more busy

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and getting a lot of stress from their work.

Moreover

, if they prefer to go there to spend their most of the time so they can bring so many advantages like, they can relax

themselves

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by doing

such

type of recreational activities

such

as

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yoga, meditation and

other form

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of

excercises

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exercises

exercise

. All in all,

parks

and squares help a lot to release their stress from their bodies and provide them

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healthy living.

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, pollution

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rising by leaps and bounds in every hook and corner of the world. So,

that

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time

parks

and gardens play a significant role in the development of a society.

For example

, public places like

parks

improve the quality of air.

Furthermore

, green spaces

also

filter rain and provide everyone

to

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a good environment and motivate people to protect

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nature and help to take a part in more and more outdoor activities. In conclusion,

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honestly believe that

parks

abd

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and

square

areas

have many merits like it helps citizens to relax and

also

beneficial to connect with

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nature.

However

, public

parks

and squares are very important for rural

areas

and cities.