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Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is argued that online
books
 will replace physical
books
although
 it is of some people’s opinion that
this
 will not occur. While physical
books
 are preferred by many as they adore the smell, look and touch of these, I believe online
books
 will take over as they are more convenient. Many people are fascinated by the smell, look, and
touch
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 of the
books
.
Books
 have their own smell, and they look impressive when placed on the shelves.
Moreover
, holding a book in your own hands while reading is an important part of the reading process for many. They think that the reading experience would be totally different if they were to read online as they
then
 would be reading on a simple screen.
For instance
, in many
homes
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 it is commonplace to have bookshelves storing many
books
 that are there because the owners treasure them.
However
, the drawback with these
books
 is that they can not be read everywhere and anytime which is the advantage of e-
books
.
Books
 on smartphones and tablets are convenient to a much larger extent than physical
books
 because they can be read whenever and wherever you want to.
This
 is already a phenomenon today. It is easy to touch a few buttons on the phone and get access to various
books
 that can be read immediately.
For example
, Kindle is a tablet made for reading
books
 online and its popularity has increased substantially in recent years. To conclude,
although
 many prefer physical
books
 as they can be looked at, smelled, and held while reading, I think it is more likely that people will prefer to read on a screen in the future because it is more convenient meaning that
books
 are available anywhere and anytime
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