In some countries younger people are increasingly losing interest in teaching. Why is this happening ? What can be done to improve the situation ? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
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countries
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school
teacher
, as other professional jobs can make more money than teaching, and some students are become
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become
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the
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school
. I think it has few
solutions to solve Correct article usage
a few
this
problem. In this
essay
I will explain the solutions and give my personal advice.
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lot
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and effort to work long hours and get less income than other Correct your spelling
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As a result
, a
institute organisation person is full of stress which they need to ensure students can learn as much as they can in the Change the article
an
school
. Therefore
, teachers
are spending a lot of time for
researching and preparing exams to make sure they are providing a useful subject for the learners. Change preposition
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, a school
teacher
is need
to prepare Change the verb form
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next
day teaching subjects at home and they need to correct students assignment in their private time.
Eventually, young people are Correct article usage
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love
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doing
something is they like rather than tie up in the education society. Wrong verb form
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Therefore
, firstly
, my suggestion is the government should rise
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raise
teachers
and pay overtime for Correct your spelling
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Secondly
, teachers
can get more retiment
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Hopefully
these few solutions can attract more young adults to work as a Add a comma
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school
organisation.
In summary, a shortage of teachers
has been developed in many countries as the number of teachers
are
decreasing year by year. Change the verb form
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Although
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teaching
however
young people should considering more in the future. I believe if the government can make some changes to secure teachers
future which it will be more attraction
for the young generation to be a Replace the word
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teacher
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