Many people think that it is better to get advice from old rather than young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that listening to old
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thoughts
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advice
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is more
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worthy
than getting it from young
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. I couldn't agree more with their idea because I believe that
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generation has a wide experience in life as they have lived longer.
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of all, old
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tend to have more knowledge than young
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about
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daily life experiences
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as dealing with
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strangers
and identifying root causes of any problem.
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, it is easier
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them to solve any issue without any harm. So, getting advice from
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person is considered a valuable
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, those
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golden
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have lived for
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time and have seen multiple events which have made them more cautious.
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, they perhaps have not attended official schools but they have gained more information that made them wisdom in
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society.
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why many of the rulers around the world are of
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population as they might rule not only with
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but
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with more knowledge. From the above mentioned, it can be concluded that getting advice from old
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is more beneficial than youngsters as they have more considerations and knowledge
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life experience
  • practical solutions
  • broader perspective
  • wisdom
  • long-term consequences
  • foresight
  • limited life experience
  • contemporary issues
  • rapidly evolving world
  • innovative solutions
  • modern thinking
  • fresh ideas
  • timeless wisdom
  • combination of advice
  • merges experience with contemporary insight
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