In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

agriculture

is the backbone of the world population.

this

sector

has a vital role in order to fulfil food

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the farm industry is so much better than before, there are many

people

around the planet who still have the struggle to afford these basic needs. in

this

essay, I will elaborate on what is behind

this

phenomenon and give some recommendations to overcome

this

problem. in my opinion, one of the reasons why

people

still go hungry in spite of advances in

agriculture

is caused by the

distribution

process

of the product itself. because the

agriculture

sector

can't be served well without support from another

sector

.

for example

, the transportation

sector

. when food

product

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products

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must be transported from the factory into costumer in a rural area,

people

there will face hungry because if the road is hard to access.

furthermore

, it is very important to make sure transportation infrastructure went well so the

distribution

process

of

agriculture

products did not face any constraint. in order to overcome

distribution

process

hardship, I recommend the stakeholder of the country to sit together and make some agreement to accelerate the

distribution

process

.

subsequently

, the agreement implements into the industry as fast as possible. to illustrate, the board of government intervention some construction

project

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projects

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to accelerate road maintenance programme so

then

the mobility

process

of the

agriculture

product can distribute well till the rural area.

finally

, even though the

agriculture

industry is advanced in so many aspects,

people

around the world still go hungry.

this

phenomenon is most probably caused by the

distribution

process

that can't be run well without support from another

sector

such

as transportation.

moreover

,

this

problem can be solved by agreement by cross-

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sector sector

stakeholders to reach the public purpose.