Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Nowadays, studying abroad is very public to many countries’ students, while living in a foreign

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speaking a foreign

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is not an easy thing sometimes it will cause some social

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or some practical

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statement and will explain why.

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of all, living in a foreign

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you must understand their culture or something that you can’t say. The most notable

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are that some words or some sentences are not

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same meaning while we are known, it might in different meanings and misunderstandings with other people.

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, I am a Taiwanese and I study in Japan. In our

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we usually speak straightly while for Japanese they do not speak so straightly and sometimes their

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have some opposite meaning in it. If we do not understand those meaning and use some NG words, it might let people mad without prepose.

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, when living in a foreign

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we will need to have some part-time job. Working in a foreign

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we must know the manner of the working culture in

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, in japan customers need to be respected and all the

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we use is totally different with we use in daily life. So, working in Japan we need to remember respectful form words

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we can even have a good image in working place. In conclusion, living in a foreign

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we have a lot of

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we need to solve

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as word using and meaning understanding or some different forms, we need to be used in working place. If we don't understand those

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cultures it will bring a negative impact to our daily life.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Your opinion

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century, and sea levels continue to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this, and what are some possible solutions?

It is common that in many companies people from different ages work together in a same team. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantges?

Hello Uncle, I hope you are doing well as well as Aunty is also good. I read in the newspaper that there was a huge flood in London last week and the place you are staying was not impacted a lot.