In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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for their compatriots.
Restrictions of how much the workforce can be paid can have positive aspects because that may hinder inequality and unjust in society. Use synonyms
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aspect is deemed important by many, it is of my opinion that there are more benefits with those that are wealthy.
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For example
, a rich person may have a cleaner, a babysitter and a driver, and many other workers that make sure his life is running smoothly.
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regulating the magnitude of the wages helps prevent inequality and unjust.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite