Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Different
people
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may have different choices when facing problems. Some
people
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choose to accept situations they got and try to accept while others prefer to get through and make some changes. Everyone has the choice to decide for their own lives.
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essay will discuss both views and give my opinion. I believe we all have some friends who have
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a positive
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mindset, thinking in good ways of anything. Those
people
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seldom feel depressed when they are facing bad situations. Happiness matters most to them.
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kind of lifestyle is worth learning since
life
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is short. Sometimes it turns out to be just a waste of time after struggling for changing without the time
coming
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back.
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, some
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who are not satisfied with undergoing situations will choose to fight with fate. They believe that hardworking can make a change and lead to a better
life
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. Some of them have to work harder and harder to support families, to offer better
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standard
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for their children and to look after better of their parents. They believe that they are not only living for themselves but
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people
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the people
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they love. Strong responsibilities encourage them to move
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and get better. From my point of view, ‘You only live
once’
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anyway, you will not know what it could be if you do not give
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shot. Baoqiang Wang, a famous Chinese actor who get many rewards during his career,
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poor
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before his success. By trying hard and making efforts, he changed his
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and earned fame. I believe his story can encourage others to have
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a stronger
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belief
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in themselves and work harder to fight a better situation and
life
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. In conclusion, these two kinds of views both make sense, depending on
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’s personalities.
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,
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best to earn a chance and
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a better
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future would be a better choice.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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