Deforestation caused by hunan activity is happentng in many parts of the world, with sertous results for the enivironment. What do you thirk can be done to solve this problem? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowl- edge and experience.
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We are living in
the
age that illegal logging is a serious issue and protection environmental policies introduced by Correct article usage
an
government
are not effective. If the governments, organizations or even individuals do not plan for new measures protecting Add an article
the government
forests
, we will confront with
biodiversity loss in the future. Change preposition
apply
This
essay will elucidate and illustrate the problems before giving concrete solutions.
The forests
are regarded as a lung of our planet, in which trees provide a natural defense
against air pollution and flood disaster; they remove carbon dioxide from the atmosphere while they emit oxygen and their leaves filter pollutants from the air. Change the spelling
defence
However
, in recent years, the scale of forests
is reduced in size by forestation and that become threats
Fix the agreement mistake
threat
regarding
human’s health and myriad Change preposition
to
Add a hyphen
plant-like
plant
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plants
like
as well as insects, worms and small mammals even aquatic animals. Correct your spelling
life
For instance
, Tree roots stabilize the soil and help to prevent erosions and water
pollution but due to forest clearance, amount
of oxygen released into Correct article usage
the amount
environment
is significantly limited and heat from the sun effects directly Add an article
the environment
water
that lead
Wrong verb form
leading
water
temperature Change preposition
to water
increase
. Fix the infinitive
to increase
Besides
, the organic matters
in soil Fix the agreement mistake
matter
flows
into the Correct pronoun usage
that flows
Correct your spelling
waterway
water way
will absorb the majority of oxygen in Correct your spelling
waterway
water
, killing fish and other aquatic wildlife.
Following that the governments should give new policies to recover destroyed forests
and introduce laws to punish criminals who endeavor
to fell trees for their purposes. With regard to organizations, hosting growth tree campaigns is the essential Change the spelling
endeavour
activities
with Fix the agreement mistake
activity
an
aim that they contribute to Correct article usage
the
interfere
decrease in size of Wrong verb form
interfering
forests
and restore
ecosystems. Wrong verb form
restoring
In addition
, each individual also
join
in logging prevention and obeys the given policies; Change the verb form
joins
for example
, people who live around the areas near the forest should be wary about strange trucks or people get
into the Wrong verb form
getting
forests
to notice timely for people being responsibility
for Replace the word
responsible
this
forest.
In a nutshell, deforestation brings sustainable consequences for the environment and biodiversity in the forests
; therefore
, it is time to commence preventing and remaining a green planet.Submitted by kelben.cb on
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