Deforestation caused by hunan activity is happentng in many parts of the world, with sertous results for the enivironment. What do you thirk can be done to solve this problem? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowl- edge and experience.

We are living in
the
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age that illegal logging is a serious issue and protection environmental policies introduced by
government
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are not effective. If the governments, organizations or even individuals do not plan for new measures protecting
forests
, we will confront
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biodiversity loss in the future.
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essay will elucidate and illustrate the problems before giving concrete solutions. The
forests
are regarded as a lung of our planet, in which trees provide a natural
defense
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against air pollution and flood disaster; they remove carbon dioxide from the atmosphere while they emit oxygen and their leaves filter pollutants from the air.
However
, in recent years, the scale of
forests
is reduced in size by forestation and that become
threats
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regarding
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human’s health and myriad
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plant
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plants
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like
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life
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as well as insects, worms and small mammals even aquatic animals.
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, Tree roots stabilize the soil and help to prevent erosions and
water
pollution but due to forest clearance,
amount
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of oxygen released into
environment
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is significantly limited and heat from the sun effects directly
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that
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water
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temperature
increase
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.
Besides
, the organic
matters
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in soil
flows
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that flows
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into the
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waterway
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water way
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will absorb the majority of oxygen in
water
, killing fish and other aquatic wildlife. Following that the governments should give new policies to recover destroyed
forests
and introduce laws to punish criminals who
endeavor
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to fell trees for their purposes. With regard to organizations, hosting growth tree campaigns is the essential
activities
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with
an
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aim that they contribute to
interfere
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decrease in size of
forests
and
restore
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ecosystems.
In addition
, each individual
also
join
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in logging prevention and obeys the given policies;
for example
, people who live around the areas near the forest should be wary about strange trucks or people
get
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into the
forests
to notice timely for people being
responsibility
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for
this
forest. In a nutshell, deforestation brings sustainable consequences for the environment and biodiversity in the
forests
;
therefore
, it is time to commence preventing and remaining a green planet.
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