Some people think it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about countries. However, other people think it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the Internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Many
people
think that in order to discover different countries, they have to travel abroad. Other people
think it is not vital, as all information can be seen on TV and online websites.
Nowadays, it is quite difficult and complicated as COVID
pandemic hit the world and it is not easy to move between countries because of quarantine, expensive tests and many documents to fill in before. Correct article usage
the COVID
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one of the reasons why people
argue about the topic mentioned above.
Technology has improved significantly over the last
20 years. It is much easier to explore different cultures and the nature of many countries. Google maps has
the option to literally walk past the streets wherever you want on the Earth! On TV, there are so many documentaries about ethnic minorities, traditional architecture and flora and fauna. You just have to have enough time to watch it all!
On another hand, it is impossible to fully get to know something without visiting it physically. Change the verb form
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that you can learn another language for a very long time, but you will not be able to speak it fluently if you do not visit the country and talk to people
in the natural environment, where it is their first
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