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More and more famous personalities including film stars and celebrities are seen giving opinions on public topics. It is hard to say exactly whether

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trend has positive or negative impacts

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society as it depends on the topic they speak about. Responding to these challenges, authorities of the countries need to assign priority to policies for job creation and

in addition

to that, reducing inequality among the different social levels

also

would benefit to address the issue.

Moreover

, the government could support innovative startups businesses and help them to grow, and

also

empower more women to work, resulting in better growth of

third

world economies and

also

contributing to a reduction in inequality.

For instance

, the Indian government has created the ‘Skills India’ program that provides training to young adults who require skills

to begin

their own enterprises and

also

look for new employment opportunities which will help to alleviate rates of unemployment and boost the local economy in long term.

On the other hand

, the very same popularity of celebrities and the massive impact they make can counteract. To be clearer, provided that the comment they make in public is irrelevant or irresponsible, it is going to have some unexpected adverse impacts on the public.

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, if a celebrity speaks something against

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national security, it affects the unity and patriotic feeling of the whole society. It can be

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seen that just to get the media hype, many instant comments are made by these people, even if they have very little knowledge about the situation.

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this

causes

confusions

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and

sectarianisms

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among the common public. To conclude, it is clear that the opinions film stars and celebrities make in the public are highly influential. If they present

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things in a socially responsible manner, it would give positive results, and if they are irresponsible, it would fetch negative consequences.