Children are experiencing increasing educational, social and commercial pressure. What are the causes? What measures do you think can be taken to reduce them?

In recent years,

although

the

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contemporary

children

seem to live a rather worry-free material life, they are

likelihood

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of less

being

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happy simply due to enormous stress from various aspects.

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essay will explore a

multitute

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multitude

of possible reasons behind

this

situation in kids, and detail some of the solutions to be addressed. There is no exaggeration to say that a competitive qualification endorsed by an eminent tertiary institute, contributes to

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job opportunities over other applicants in today’s

labor

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market.

For example

, students have to sacrifice their quality time for overwhelming study for extra classes after class on a regular basis

instead

of their authentic hobbies.

Furthermore

, parents’ expectation is attributed to these stresses on

children

.

This

is because many spouses are often willing to invest a huge amount of expense in private tutorials for their kids to gain

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in their

children

’s academic performance. As a consequence,

this

will give rise

for

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a tremendous invisible pressure from family’s unprecedented expectations on the young generation’s

shoulder

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. To reduce the youngster’s stress, in my view, the mutual understanding between parents and

children

might be one of the workable

solution

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.

For instance

, the frequent open communication between two sides can facilitate, through which the

children

’s psychological barriers and learning weaknesses could be exposed to parents freely.

In addition

, if peer pressures created by parents are eliminated as well as encourage

children

to set a more realistic goal based upon their authentic interests and potentials,

this

will prompt true motivation and passion for a joyful learning process. In conclusion,

although

parents’ force, hopes can boost the development of their youngsters in some way,

this

approach can

causes

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some counterproductive impacts. In my opinion, the genius understanding and the fundamental change in the social attitude towards the definition of success may be the ultimate solutions to the current worrisome situation.