In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this? how can people research this?

Now a day's myriad people inculcated of to know the
history
of there houses there lives in. Along with they acclimatized some researches to find the past of the building.
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countries
, folk are keen to find the
history
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, which included several reasons behind that one. The
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and foremost thing is to understand
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what culture they had, which civilization they inculcated in the past. If the building belongs to
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100 or 150 years ago, which
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buildings
contain some
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, Indian people
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this
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in their dilapidated buildings. Due to
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, they found myriad valuable
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like stones, jewels along with some precious coins and some diamonds
also
they found.
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to get that
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,several
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proper guidance to follow. Another one is the archaeology department they do methodical way, which is facil for them to do
this
type
of
research
. In conclusion, it can be seen that to know the
history
of the building or house they live in , which contains so much beneficial for them to live future. The prominent thing is advanced technology they found easily the
history
of the house. It enhances their living standards better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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