Many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online.
Internet
has been changing the world significantly. For easing the process of buying and selling the goods some people prefer doing it through Add an article
The Internet
internet
. Add an article
the internet
Benefits
and drawbacks of Correct article usage
The benefits
this
notion will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
Online shopping has made easier
to do shopping. A person does not have to visit Correct pronoun usage
it easier
to
the store Remove the preposition
apply
for
buying Change preposition
to
a products
as Correct the article-noun agreement
products
a product
one
can for the same just effortlessly sitting at work place
or home. Correct your spelling
workplace
Moreover
, a customer is provided more details about the product
on online sites and one
can also
compare the features of product
simultaneously right on the site. Correct article usage
the product
In addition
, a customer does not have to stand in long
queue at the cash counter unlike at malls and grocery stores, where Add an article
a long
the long
one
has to wait in a queue for billing.
On the other side, online shopping lacks the touch and feel experience
of the goods, Add an article
the experience
besides
this
person
has to buy clothes without trying on it. Add the comma(s)
,person
However
, offline stores are more convenient in these aspects, where individual
is given full freedom to touch the Add an article
the individual
an individual
product
as well as one
can try on clothes before buying. What is more, one
has not to wait for delivery of the product
as in online shopping. In addition
, online customers are more likely to be sold fake and bad quality products, which cost them their money and time.
To conclude, shopping on internet
has convenience over offline shopping in some aspects but Add an article
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one
has to be careful about scammers as Add an article
a customer
the customer
customer
can be scammed easily on Fix the agreement mistake
customers
internet
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the internet
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...