Many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online.
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Internet
has been changing the world significantly. For easing the process of buying and selling the goods some people prefer doing it through Add an article
The Internet
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internet
. Add an article
the internet
Benefits
and drawbacks of Correct article usage
The benefits
this
notion will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
Online shopping has made Linking Words
easier
to do shopping. A person does not have to visit Correct pronoun usage
it easier
to
the store Remove the preposition
apply
for
buying Change preposition
to
a products
as Correct the article-noun agreement
products
a product
one
can for the same just effortlessly sitting at Use synonyms
work place
or home. Correct your spelling
workplace
Moreover
, a customer is provided more details about the Linking Words
product
on online sites and Use synonyms
one
can Use synonyms
also
compare the features of Linking Words
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product
simultaneously right on the site. Correct article usage
the product
In addition
, a customer does not have to stand in Linking Words
long
queue at the cash counter unlike at malls and grocery stores, where Add an article
a long
the long
one
has to wait in a queue for billing.
On the other side, online shopping lacks the touch and feel Use synonyms
experience
of the goods, Add an article
the experience
besides
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this
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person
has to buy clothes without trying on it. Add the comma(s)
,person
However
, offline stores are more convenient in these aspects, where Linking Words
individual
is given full freedom to touch the Add an article
the individual
an individual
product
as well as Use synonyms
one
can try on clothes before buying. What is more, Use synonyms
one
has not to wait for delivery of the Use synonyms
product
as in online shopping. Use synonyms
In addition
, online customers are more likely to be sold fake and bad quality products, which cost them their money and time.
To conclude, shopping on Linking Words
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internet
has convenience over offline shopping in some aspects but Add an article
the internet
one
has to be careful about scammers as Use synonyms
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a customer
the customer
customer
can be scammed easily on Fix the agreement mistake
customers
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internet
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the internet
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...