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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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In some sections of societies, people have lost
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control of their heaviness and they are not in superior condition and fit. The origins of
this
 situation seem to stem from two factors. While several remedies
apear
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appear
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First
 of
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 it seems according to the developing of equipment and even public transportation, the
requiered
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 of physical activities is decreased and actions that used to be done by humans themselves are now done by machines and
consequently
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 people do less movement and activity,
then
 weight gain is
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 probable event.
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 the sort of
entertainments
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 and spending spare time
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 been changed, in the past youth did
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workouts
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work outs
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 like
runing
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running
 and jogging together and enjoyed doing them but nowadays,
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games
 and social networks have been replaced, there are no physical activities in front of computers and
as a
result
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 increasing weight
then
 decreasing their fitness. In order to solve the problem of obesity and lack of
health
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 there are several remedies but it seems one of the most important steps to settle these problems is
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 to force or at least encouraging adolescents and youth to spend at least one
houre
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hour
hours
 a day exercising or playing tough and physical
games
. Another preparation that could be considered is restricting the hours that young people even
elderly
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 are in front of
television
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the television
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 or playing
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board
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bord
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games
, they most probably will resist in front of these limitations but eventually will find out itʼs benefits for their health conditions. In
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 it seems developing of
transpritation
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transportation
 systems and lack of need for physical
motion
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 and
in
addition
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 changing in the kind of enjoying and playing could be the main causes of these problems and the solutions are considered forcing for work out for youth and limitations for playing computer
games
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • physical activity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • exercise
  • unhealthy diet
  • fast food
  • urbanization
  • modernization
  • stress
  • awareness
  • education
  • government intervention
  • policies
  • promotion
  • sports
  • fitness programs
  • health education
  • taxation
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • parks
  • recreational spaces
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