Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say Agree to this arrangement. Say what time is suitable for you. *Describe what you are planning to do.

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Hi Lily, I'

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letter to let you know that I'

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happy to look after your girl Susan

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the weekend. As

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discussion

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early, I'

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planning to let Susan

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stay in my sister room because my little sis will go

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mother house

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for the weekend. So, I,

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excited that your girl can come to my place to give me some accompany. For the plan, I'

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thinking I could teach her swimming as you know she love to learn

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, and she has asked me

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to teach her

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. So, I think now is the best

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for her to learn a summer lesson. At night

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, I think I might bring her to my mother house to have dinner with them as my mum decided to cook sweet and sour fish and pei-king duck, her cooking experience especially, famous and well-known in our town. For

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day or maybe let her pick some

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my planed now, If you could think of anything that would be better for us just give me a call, I'

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you. Bye for now. Best

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

216 words

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