In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent?

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Nowadays old and ancient traditional
languages
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have been unremembered or wiped out
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globalization by new
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, and
this
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is happening all over the world. The issue is not entirely straightforward, and arguments can
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be made against the idea. In
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essay,
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will be discussed and given
concluding
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a concluding
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view. On the one hand, Speakers who
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lose the culture and history of a
people
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which may be thousands of years old when a
language
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vanishes can be said that we should try to protect it. Because we
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lose the knowledge of the
people
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who speak the
language
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. In a famous case in northern Australia, doctors could not find a cure for a skin problem that
people
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in the area developed. When they asked a local Aboriginal woman, she used her own
language
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to describe a plant which was a cure for the disease. The other side of
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is that traditional
language
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be
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unenforceable in practical terms.
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is because
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almost useless in everyday life,
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About 60% of the world’s population speak one of the twenty most common
languages
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, and the figures for speakers of world
languages
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such
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as English, Spanish and Chinese are increasing rapidly.
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, in South Africa, young
people
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are choosing to use English
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of traditional
languages
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like Venda and Tsonga, because they need English to study in higher education. In conclusion, We should not worry too much about a
language
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’s disappearance and I personally agree with the opinion that with only several
languages
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that exist in the world, life will be easier.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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