You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Mr Scot Wherry, I am writing to let you know that I and my family members are not satisfied with the condition of some

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. I am Jay Dave who has rented apartment B10. The apartment itself is completely fine nothing odd in it,

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, we are not happy with some

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because most of them look outdated and some of them are broken.

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, one of the mattresses is heavily stained and not comfortable at all.

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, the dish washer's drain is badly clogged. Would you kindly replace the old

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for us? I would like you

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to call someone to come and fix our dishwasher as soon as possible, while the broken

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I will fix by myself since I have the right tools and I am not that busy yet. I hope you will consider my situation. Waiting for your reply. Yours faithfully, Jay Dave

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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