‘The best way to educate children is by using the Internet in every lesson.’ To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children?

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in education can be

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beneficial way but, there are other possible ways that would seem to be more effective

rather

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than the

internet

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.

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disadvantage

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disadvantages

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of teaching lessons using the

internet

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and provide some alternatives.

Firstly

, using the

internet

frequently during

lesson

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lessons

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may lead children to dependent

from

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it. Result

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this

, many

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students may rely on only the

internet

and

thus

this

method would impact them to use only the

internet

rather than other ways.

For instance

, using dictionary applications

instead

of dictionary books is more common.

Furthermore

, sitting a long time on the

internet

might

affect

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some health-related problems

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students,

such

as

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diseases,

back

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disorder

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.

Therefore

, the

internet

could not be the best way

in educating

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to educate

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process

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. Turning to viable alternatives, can be the most effective would be to introduce learning

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ways

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during the communicating and playing.

For example

, trying to make models for houses in design

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lessons

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and drawing sunshine

while

seeing it, visiting hospitals and helping the

nurse

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nurses

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seeing

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how they work,

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going to

farmers

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home

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and

meet

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with herders. Understanding any kind of subject through

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nature and doing

helps

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encourage them to learn more. In conclusion,

although

teaching lessons

in

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on

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the

internet

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might be seen

one

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as one

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of the best ways, it would not be the most effective option

on

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for

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some subjects. Introducing

multi-sensory

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process to

lesson

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lessons

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and organizing many

kind

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of

action

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in school, seem to be more helpful to study well.