In the future,more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

Tourism

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industry is

a

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money earning field around the globe due to

the

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globalisation. In the upcoming years, mankind would love to

visit

on

vocation

in their home nation

instead

of travelling an overseas for holiday. I strongly disagree with

this

statement and

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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with,

folks

will not be chosen to go on

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vacation

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vocation

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vacation

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in their

mother land

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motherland

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and they would love to

visit

foreign nations for their relaxation purpose because

future

's

folks

should have numerous eager to explore other states. Foreign states will have countless attraction

place

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to

attracting

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overseas,

therefore

, they never love to

visit

on their own land.

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, Indians

visit

to

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overseas because they want a new location

ijnstead

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instead

of

ususual

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usual

unusual

sides and attractions

such

as

Maladive

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Maldives

Maldive

.

Hence

,

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up

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upcoming

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coming

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years mankind will not go to

vocation

on own country.

Furthermore

,

future

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tourism industry should be attracted by their

affrotable

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affordable

price and service,

therefore

, many

nation's

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nations'

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primary financial sources

is

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tourism

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the tourism

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field and in

future

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this

trend will be continued.

For instance

,

Maladives

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Maldives

earn a million dollars of earning in one year for

overseasing

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overseas

overseeing

visitors rather than their own residents.

In addition

, if

folks

will have holidays in

future

, they would prefer to go to

other country

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another country

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for exploring new things and culture, tradition.

Therefore

,

future

people would not go to

visit

their

mother land

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motherland

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when they will have holidays. To conclude, overseas travel will give countless new

experience

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experiences

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and

wisdoms

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wisdom

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when

future

folks

would go

to

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abroad on

vocation

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vacation

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rather than visiting their home nation.

Therefore

, I strongly disagree with

this

statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope

this

process is conducive to exploring new locations rather than

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usual

unusual

ususual

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being ususual

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.