In spite of the advance made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem.

Regarding the advancement of the technology made in agriculture,

food

is still scarce and as a

result

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people around the world go hungry.

This

is mainly because of the increasing population and the weather conditions. There are some solutions which should be implemented to deal with

this

problem.

First

and foremost, even though

the

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technology has helped farmers to plant crops ,

however

, the growing proportion of newborn babies and

food

production are unequal.

In other words

, the demand

is significantly oversupply

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.

Moreover

, the seasonal are the obstacles for both the plants and farmers to grow since it is quite difficult for the technology to go against nature.

For example

, the strawberry can only grow during December because the humidity of the soil and the low temperature can give the opportunity for them to see the strawberry. There are two effective solutions to the problems of not enough

food

. One way to tackle

this

is to find substitute plants that can be eaten

instead

of the ingredients that we used to consume every day.

Furthermore

, the planting process may need to be artificial meaning that, some of the crops that are not growing all the seasons can be grown indoor where there were sunlight, water, temperature or humid control.

Therefore

, we would be able to get more ingredients for

food

. In conclusion, discovering the plants for a consumption replacement as well as

to

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organise the controllable location to plant crops can solve the problem of

food

scarcity and

consequently

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people will get enough

food

to eat.