Some people believe that the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is true that people think that learning in the

university

helps

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individuals individuals

to get better employment opportunities.

However

,others say that there are better outcomes after completion of academic learning for both individuals and society,I agree. In

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essay,I will discuss both sides and give the necessary opinion. On the one hand, a

university

's curriculum benefits the students from various aspects in the future.

Such

as, it acknowledges theory and practical experience for the public.

Moreover

,

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can build confidence skills and motivate a specified career.

Secondly

,studying in

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academy provides a candidate in getting professional help from a choice of field or a subject. To illustrate

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,in future jobs,they can get a good reference from the lecturers of the

university

.

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can be a stepping stone for youngsters for getting better jobs.

Lastly

,folks can have

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various outcomes from

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university

learning.

For example

,attending workshops helps them to know how to socialise in the work culture,different workshops conducted by

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team can help them in knowing the subject knowledge,various areas of the research developmental techniques.

Furthermore

,

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individual learning styles are apparently different

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universities can help and guide them in building the candidates professional career and

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can help individuals and

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. From other perspectives,people think that getting

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work experience after graduating degree is more important than a

university

degree because of the person's

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and family responsibilities.

For instance

,80% of women graduates are not able to attend

university

studies because of the family burdens and situations around them.

Such

as, single mothers cannot afford to continue their education

further

.

Therefore

,neighbours think that the learning in a

university

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their income plan and capable of running their family.

Moreover

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are

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enhancing

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drawback and getting jobs after graduating. In conclusion,

although

there are many institutions that are providing education for individuals. I believe that it depends upon the situation of the community and resources.