With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their meals Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
People
are getting so much busy nowadays for few
particular Correct article usage
a few
reason
. For saving their Change to a plural noun
reasons
time
in working hour
and during gossiping, most of the Fix the agreement mistake
hours
time
people
are having fast food
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.
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examples
this
modern world, people
are getting fast food
easily by ordering in
online. During working hours Change preposition
apply
people
are having mouthwatering fast
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fast-food
food
pizza, burger
, Fix the agreement mistake
burgers
sandwise
and many others. They Correct your spelling
sandwich
sandwiches
are easily fulfill
their hunger in Change the verb form
are easily fulfilling
short
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a short
the short
time
which is good. Beside
buying Correct your spelling
Besides
people
are making fast food
for their kids and invited guest
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guests
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, few
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a few
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earlier I went Change to a plural noun
months
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to meet my best friend, where he Change preposition
to Malaysia
live
alone. Because he lives alone so Replace the word
lives
instade
of Correct your spelling
instead
cook
at home, most of the Wrong verb form
cooking
time
he buy
fast Change the verb form
buys
food
from market
or online, which may Correct article usage
the market
fulfill
his hunger but Change the spelling
fulfil
this
is not a good way. It could impact badly on his health.
Additionally
. Nowadays, people
are being overweighted for having fast food
frequently, and affecting with many desease
. Some reliable recharger from Correct your spelling
disease
diseases
UK
, publish their recharge paper Correct article usage
the UK
on
the guardian newspaper. There they mention 60% of Change preposition
in
people
are being fat for having fast food
and damaging their stomac
badly. Correct your spelling
stomach
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these Replace the word
Besides
people
are having many other problem
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problems
such
as gastric and disesting
.
To sum up. Correct your spelling
digesting
Fulfill
hunger is important but having Change the spelling
Fulfil
unhealthy
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an unhealthy
fastfood
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fast food
are
so bad Change the verb form
is
our
body. Change preposition
for our
People
should not eat fast food
on daily basis. Be
healthy is more important Wrong verb form
Being
then
eating mouthwatering fast Replace the word
than
food
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite