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In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can this cause?

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In recent times, there is a tendency among the common
people
 to migrate from rural
areas
 to urban
areas
. Some
people
 make
this
 decision due to
prevalence
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 of ample job opportunities, while others settle there for better education and health-care facilities.
However
,
this
also
 brings about some drawbacks,
such
 as affecting agricultural production and aggravation of already persisting overpopulation problems. Rural to urban migration has a number of causative factors. One of the most obvious causes is that urban city
centers
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 provide lots of job opportunities to
its
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 residents.
This
 is because, majority of the companies like to build up their headquarters and offices within the city
areas
, which opens up plenty of working scopes for the employees.
For example
, youngsters in Bangladesh leave their countryside houses and settle in city
areas
 with the hopes of getting a well-paid job. Another reason behind
this
 shifting is that cities are not only equipped with
prominent
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 educational
institution
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institutions
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 but
also
 internationally accredited hospitals.
Consequently
,
people
 want to move there in order to enjoy
better
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 standard of life. In conclusion, since there is
higher
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 probability of getting lucrative jobs and
enhanced
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an enhanced
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 lifestyle in
metropolis
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the metropolis
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,
people
 tend to show
greater
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the greater
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 interest
of
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in
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 moving into big cities, which, in turn, destroys the agricultural side and breeds numerous overpopulation problems in urban
areas
.
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