Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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the tough thing is maintaining

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, it is not only for

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parents

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some people believe that

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should be the responsibility of guardians,

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hand, when

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usually their

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some responsibility to their kids maintaining

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, need to guardians maintain their lifestyle in the

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,

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children

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are try

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to control their lifestyle

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automatically

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birth.

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of the important

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is for

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to their

children

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teach about

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in their daily routine. Nowadays,

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are addicted

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electronics

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late

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, as a consequence, kids

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not maintain their

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, guardians should

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and teach their kids how to follow the

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parents

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are birth giver their

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are main

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about better education of their

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, while better education means, healthy study as well as maintaining

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. Whereas, most of the time

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are

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in the

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in a day. That's why

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students

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are get

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moral education from

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can make

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discipline

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role

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for

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and should have a punishment for which

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break the

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. It is an effective way

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maintaining

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, when I was a student of high

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was my

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is without

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and another is, if I did not

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on time,

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teachers

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were did

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permission

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the

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. So, all the

student

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try to maintain

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are need

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to add a subject on

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for the

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study

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curriculum

. I think it is more effective for

students

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maintaining

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discipline

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, the teacher can manage

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properly.

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,

teachers

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and

parents

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both are important to every child for improving their mental growth.

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are more impact on every

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students

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healthy future.