Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that

,

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the tough thing is maintaining

discipline

, it is not only for

teachers

but

also

all

of

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parents

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the parents

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.

Although

some people believe that

discipline

should be the responsibility of guardians,

main

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role

of

teachers

for

maintaining

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this

. On the

one

hand, when

parents

are

panchual

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punctual

usually their

children

are

also

panchual

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punctual

. So

parents

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some responsibility to their kids maintaining

discipline

.

Firstly

, need to guardians maintain their lifestyle in the

discipline

,

therefore

, their

children

are try

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to control their lifestyle

automaticaly

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automatically

because they have been watching that from

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birth.

Secondly

,

one

of the important

thing

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is for

parents

to their

children

teach about

discipline

in their daily routine. Nowadays,

children

are addicted

on

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electronics

gudgets

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gadgets

budgets

, so they are playing games,

watching

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movies use by the

gudget

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gadget

budget

, after that they are sleeping in

the

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late

night

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, as a consequence, kids

are do

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not maintain their

discipline

.

However

, guardians should

be control

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this

and teach their kids how to follow the

discipline

.

On the other hand

,

Although

parents

are birth giver their

children

,

teachers

are main

concern

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about better education of their

students

, while better education means, healthy study as well as maintaining

discipline

. Whereas, most of the time

students

are

stying

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staying

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in the

school

in a day. That's why

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students

are get

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moral education from

teachers

.

Furthermore

,

teachers

can make

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discipline

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role

for

students

and should have a punishment for which

one

break the

role

. It is an effective way

for

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of

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maintaining

died

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.

For example

, when I was a student of high

school

that

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time two main

role

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in

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was my

school

,

one

is without

uniform

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and another is, if I did not

went

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to

school

on time,

then

teachers

were did

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not

permition

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permission

for

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entry

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the

school

. So, all the

student

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students

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try to maintain

this

.

Inaddition

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In addition

,

teachers

are need

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to add a subject on

discipline

for the

students

study

cariculum

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curriculum

. I think it is more effective for

students

maintaining

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to maintain

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discipline

.

Nevertheless

, the teacher can manage

students

properly.

Finally

,

teachers

and

parents

both are important to every child for improving their mental growth.

However

,

teachers

are more impact on every

students

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healthy future.