Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear.Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Today
technology
starts to
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the world where each element
start
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to change in line with
technology
to captialized the new
market
opportunities and make sure to survive in the
market
.
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of e-
books
is a perfect
example
how
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tehnology
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technology
involves in different industries. Today
mixes
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kind of believes exist in the current
market
where few
people
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think
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that
e
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ebook
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book
going to
the
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be the
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future of the
book
publication
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industry
where as
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whereas
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on the other hand
few thinks that can be still able to read the
books
in hard papers. Development in the internet connection is the main root cause for the development of
smart phone
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, computers and
tables
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tablets
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.
Then
based on those development replacement for hard copies starts to create
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and
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e
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e-book
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book
in
a
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one of
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example
. Nowadays
people
feel more comfortable and find very
convinance
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convenience
about the
useage
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usage
of the e-
book
where they can get required information or can read any
books
at any given time slot.
This
forces to make the un-productive hours to more productive hours.According to the recent publication by
world
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a world
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large
e -
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ebook
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book
company indicating that there was a 25% improvement exist in the number of
user
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users
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compare to
last
year.
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introduction
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places
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in
early
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20s
however
in the society still we have a population who like to read
book
bascially
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basically
in
hard
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paper
,
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because their
use
to it and find more comfortable with it.
Therefore
those
eldery
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elderly
older
generation
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think until they are alive
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newspaper
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paper
will
be publish
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be published
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in
hard
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paper
.For
an
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example
aging
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population
more
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is more
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than 50 plus only the target group for the existing
paper
book
pubilishing
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publishing
company. Every
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industry
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works with profit purpose where each company owners start to think
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about how
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to
maxmize
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maximize
their current sales and ensure
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sustainable sales figure in future too.
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shareholder
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shareholders
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also
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are also
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keen to
use
the current able
technology
to maximize the
opportunties
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opportunities
exist
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that exist
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in the
market
.So I am strongly
belived
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believed
believe
belive
that onwards
paper
books
become as
a
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exhibition
intrustment
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entrustment
instrument
and a lot of
people
start
use
e-
book
for their reading habit or improve their knowledge. In
couclusion
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conclusion
, I
brief
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explained the in
upcoming
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period a lot of
people
start to
use
e-
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the e-book
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book
as
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a replacement
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replacement
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replacements
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for
the
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paper
book
because they may feel more comfortable and can
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their unproductive hours especially when they are stuck in traffic or waiting for a friend.
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still small segment
having
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has
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the habit of reading
books
but after some time when these
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fall under the unprofitable segment
then
paper
book
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books
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become
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becomes
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as
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apply
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a
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an
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example
how
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of how
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technology
replacing the industries norms.
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