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All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language.

#children #language #school #child
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 version so that
people
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children
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this
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children
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language
. I
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 to analyze the importance of learning
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language
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children
.
To begin
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foreign
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language
 is not only important for
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children
 but
also
 need for all stages
people
.If the
children
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language
 quickly. All over the world
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 is so much important and no one can go far or gain
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.
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times
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people
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 so that they are
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 that things, But at present all the
people
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 parents are more concerned about
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.
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 need for the
student
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higher studies.
As a
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student
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test
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the study
in
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abroad. Which
student
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 medium they can easily pass that
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test
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on the contrary
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test
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 quite easy to learn
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childhood because elder ages students
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learn
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english
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. In the working place.abroad all over the places need it.
For example
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student
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 but get chances possibility is the
student
 who good at
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. Because that
student
 can easily tackle the foreigner buyer by his
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.
This
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 helps to
increasing
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 the reputation of the company. To conclude, Necessary
language
 it is and all the classes
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 subject is
compulsary
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compulsory
. All the parents should increase their awareness for
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learning foreign
language
 at the early stages and for the better future of their child.
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