People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

It is argued that
people
inhabitating
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inhabiting
the large cities have to face a lot of the difficulties in everyday life circle. Some of the biggest disadvantages
results
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in
enviromental
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environmental
problems and expensive
accomodation
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accommodation
. In my
opinion
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it is crucial to motivate
people
to migrate to the smaller regional towns to avoid irreversible
nature
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global changes. Air pollution is one of the biggest
struggle
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to live
with in
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within
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the
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a
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huge
city
.
Since
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few
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a few
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decades condition of the air is getting very poor. It's not meant only for the huge agglomerations but for the whole planet.
However
, major factories which are producing health
affective
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smoke are placed in the biggest cities around the world.
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example
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in Hong
Kong
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,Kong
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it is forbidden to take a
city
walk without covering your face
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mask
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a mask
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.
This
is because of smoke produced by the fossil fuel factories. In
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with
mind
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i
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think it is very important to motivate
people
to move to the other, smaller regions. 
Secondly
, I've seen so many opinions on expensive
accomodations
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accommodations
around the largest cities.
This
is because
people
want to live around new emerging events
such
as
theatere
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theatre
performences
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performances
performance
or
sport
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exhibitions.
For Instance
, in the
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capitol
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of England, London more than 6 football teams are currently playing in the Premier League.
There's
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so many things to do that you can find out of your
culture
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indication.
Moreover
, living in
larger
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the larger
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city
means
more
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a more
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payable
job
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and better transport communication. To summarise,
people
have to face many problems while living in
larger
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a larger
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city
as environmental disadvantages or expensive
accomodation
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accommodation
. It's very important to encourage citizens to migrate to smaller
city
areas to let the environment be more sustainable.
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