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Learning English at schools is often seen as more important than local languages. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it more important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure survival of local languages and if so, how?

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English
 has a subject been constantly rising among all
people
 ,particularly in non-
English
 speaking countries.
English
 should be learned during school rather than the local
language
 . I strongly agreed with the topic ,
this
 essay will give a supporting point on why
English
 is important. On one hand , the value of knowing
English
 is on an increasing trend nowadays .
People
 prefer talking and learning
English
 for higher education as a basic
language
. In India For illustration , they have multiple languages like
Hindi
 , Marathi , Telugu, Malayalam and Tamil in
this
 they consider
Hindi
 is the national
language
 but few of the South Indians don’t know how to talk in
Hindi
 so when the other
language
people
 travel to
Hindi
 speaking cities they manage to talk in
English
.
On the other hand
,
English
 is considered the universal
language
 all over the world. Local
language
 can be learned by local peoples and
also
 they can develop the
language
 by day to day conversation. But the
English
language
 should be encouraged among all for a better future for personal understanding of the situation.
For example
, The
English
language
 helps individuals to get a better job in the future to be more specific IT profession and Doctor professions were thought in
English
 all over the world . When we study
English
 during our childhood can choose the profession
accordingly
. To sum up , Local
language
 can be learned from a daily conversation among
people
 but
English
 should be though to each individual to choose the profession as well as for the personal growth of the individuals.
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