You are going to spend your vacation in Rome, Italy. Your friend's grandfather lives there and has offered to let you stay in his apartment. Write a letter to your friend's grandfather. In your letter: Thank him for the offer but politely decline Inform him of when you will be in Rome and your travel plans Invite him for an outing

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Dear Mr Aman, I hope you are in the pink of your health.I was overjoyed and elated when I got your letter.I am grateful that you invited me to your place.Shivam used to tell me the stories and the funny incidents that he had with you.I was always curious to visit your house.But,

this

time it won't be possible for me to visit your house.Unfortunately,I have some other plans on that day which have been made in advance and it is impossible to cancel it now. Let me explain my plan,I will be coming to Rome on 14th March 2022 and I have made 3nights/4days trip.On the

first

two days,I have a business-related meeting while on the

last

day,I am planning to roam around the famous monuments that are located near to my hotel which is situated in the centre of the city. If possible,please suggest to me some timings,when you will be free as I will be totally vacant on 16th March 2022.I will book a taxi and we will catch at some common place where we can spend our quality time. I hope to hear from you soon Give my regards to Shivam Warm wishes, Harman

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

197 words

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