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Write an essay about the advantages and disadvantages about the living in a countryside

Nowadays, it's a fact that people love living in the
countryside
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 for some reason. But
besides
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 huge advantages, there are
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 several disadvantages. There are a lot of positive aspects of living in the
countryside
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.
Firstly
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, the
countryside
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 is less polluted than a city. You can enjoy fresh air, clean rivers, peaceful views, and simple life there.
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, there will be no traffic jams because the main vehicles are bikes, electric motorbikes or walking.
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 the roads are small, you will rarely breathe dirty air or polluted gases.
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, the living cost there is cheaper because almost all food is supplied by the locals. It’s estimated that the price in the city is much higher than that of the same food in the
country
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.
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, living in the
country
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 has some problems. Choosing to live there means that you have very few forms of entertainment. There aren’t any recreation parks, shopping malls or games there.
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, if you are young, you will have few opportunities in the
country
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 to develop your career. Another problem concerns the access to the hospitals, schools, police stations and shops, which are usually located far from the village. To sum up, there are have both advantages and disadvantages of living in the
countryside
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. I suggest that
country
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 life is suitable for elderlies rather than young people or having a holiday.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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