In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People

will not purchase printed

media

, namely newspapers or

books

, as they can get everything they want to read on the Internet without emptying their pockets in the future. Considering the environmental issue and practicality, I completely agree that no one will ever buy physical

books

and newspapers in the

decade.

Firstly

, printed

books

are one of the main reasons why deforestation is happened in many parts of the world over the

last

decade, since producing paper needs to cut down around one whole pine tree.

Thus

, countless forests around the world have already been lost only for producing

books

and newspapers.

Furthermore

, many paper producing companies do not follow the Paris Agreement, which has a set of rules to make sure that the companies must conduct reforestation. Another reason why most

people

will prefer online

media

to printed

books

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is since getting information on the internet is much easier than printed

media

. The Internet has been progressing well

this

decade

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so that many

people

can access updated news or information in no time.

For example

, Amazon, the most prominent e-book store, has offered their customers

for

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download e-

books

with no time and can access their

books

on their devices.

Moreover

, online

media

does not need a place to store,

such

as a bookshelf.

Hence

people

might read their online newspaper wherever and whenever they want. In conclusion, I support the utilization of online

media

since it is more practical and environmentally friendly.

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3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

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244 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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