Some people belive that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinión
Some think that
this
is a
best way Change the article
the
to
Change preposition
for to
folks
can accept their terrible situation
while other
say that Correct pronoun usage
others
this
tendency should be developed this
Change preposition
in this
position
. This
essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the latter situation
for the following reasons.
On the one hand, this
is a
best way Change the article
the
to
mankind accepts their present Change preposition
for to
position
rather than feeling such
as lack of financial resource and unsatisfied employment because life
is a short period, therefore
, folks
should be lived a happy lifestyle
. In addition
, happiness is the essential aspect of mankind life
, therefore
, they do not worry about their unpleasent
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unpleasant
position
and they should be adopted. For example
, in few
south Asian nation's humankind live terrible Correct article usage
a few
lifesyle
day to day, even though, they live a happy Correct your spelling
lifestyle
lifestyle
by they adopt their situation
. Hence
, the population accept their current unpleasent
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unpleasant
position
.
On the other hand
, certainly, this
position
should be developed by folks
who are suffered in these situations hardwork
and effort because every person Correct your spelling
hard work
have
a right to improve to their Change the verb form
has
situation
like if a person does not love to
their job, he should change their employment, Change preposition
apply
thus
, they would be felt better as well as life
too. For instance
, in Western nation's people always try to improve their current position
to better
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a better
lifestyle
by putting numerous hardwork
and effort, Correct your spelling
hard work
as a result
, now they are well developed
countries rather than Asian states. Add a hyphen
well-developed
Therefore
, mankind should try to develop their unpleasent
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unpleasant
situation
to a better position
.
To conclude, folks
accept to
their evil situations and Change preposition
apply
this
can lead to living happy lifestyle
, in contrast
, they should be improved to their unpleasent
positions by Correct your spelling
unpleasant
hardwork
and effort. In my opinion, about Correct your spelling
hard work
this
, the population could be developed their present position
in order to they might be lived a better life
. I hope this
process is conducive to being a healthy and happy life
.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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