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Some people prefer to have temporary jobs, which means they only work a few months in a year and use the rest of the time to do what they want. What is your opinion?

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Several representatives of contemporary society prefer to be hired in temporary
occupation
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.
Thus
, they deem that they can
work
 for a couple of weeks and go on vacation
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the
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different
time
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. From my perspective, it can not be denied that
this
 statement is composed of a fraction of the truth.
Therefore
, I am going to reflect on
this
 essay my own view of
such
 a tendency and to provide strong arguments, which confirm my position. On the one hand, the population must have an occupation. In my opinion, the core job should be coherent with the person’s qualification.
However
, it would be unfair not to mention the fact that a large number of people changes their degree after leaving universities and colleges and often embark to learn a new qualification.
Likewise
, some people change multiple workplaces in order to find themselves.
Besides
, employees often disappear their motivation because of troubles in workplaces
such
 as lower level of wages, a lot of tasks from employers, overloading.
Hence
, some companies should provide different internships for beginners in order to assist them to choose a desirable occupation.
On the other hand
, some experts allege that
persons
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 prefer to alter their workplaces in order to have a lot of free time for leisure purposes. From my point of view, one of the
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main reasons why experts contend
such
 consists of the lower level of hardworking of
such
persons
. As far as I am concerned, some students do not interest
into
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make
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 a career or
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 recruited
in
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 huge corporations.
Furthermore
, contemporary possibilities of social media have an enormous impact on the population and trigger certain repercussions for it.
For instance
, the Internet provides
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 online
workplace
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 for
persons
 and several of them contemplate that it is not necessary to go to
work
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 when they can
work
 at home in desirable for
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them
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 time.
Likewise
, humans can organise their lives and activities with regard to the online job.
Nevertheless
,
such
persons
 are minor and the majority wants to be qualified employees, rather
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that
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 unskilled. To sum up, I would stress that having made these points, it is true that
such
 a tendency incurs criticism.
Nonetheless
, only
persons
 must decide upon for themselves, which type of
work
 they prefer.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • pursue
  • self-development
  • life satisfaction
  • balance
  • job security
  • financial instability
  • stress and anxiety
  • unemployment
  • long-term financial commitments
  • diverse experiences
  • employability
  • broader perspective
  • adaptable
  • innovative
  • career progression
  • benefits
  • personal growth
  • financial security
  • invest
  • career milestones
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