As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. To what extent do you agree?

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It has been said, that

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could replace the job of

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in the

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, as they are being used more and more in education.

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essay totally disagrees with the statement.

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could not happen.

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can not do the job of

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properly. What do I mean by that? Yes, can always tell you the right information and answer, but

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not all it takes to become a teacher and to be able to teach. A

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job is a lot more than just teaching information. In some way, they have to take care of the children in the classroom. They have to always control and entertain them.

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they have to be constantly around them and to keep looking after them.

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, a kid starts feeling sick while the computer is teaching the lesson. The machine is not going to do anything because it has no emotions, only

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acknowledgement

. While, if there is a teacher, he or she will react immediately.

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people have designed and programmed

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to be that smart. Which means that we are smarter than them.

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, just because of the fact that we are human, and every human being makes mistakes. Someone might have programmed the computer wrong.

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the computer might fail in the middle of a lesson, which means that the lesson is ruined and the kids won't be able to learn anything for the day. To conclude, I think that

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jobs will never

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because people are the only beings in the world that can teach each other properly.

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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. To what extent do you agree?

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before.Some people say anageing population creates problemsfor governments.Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

3.What would you contribute to the cohort and to the Imperial community?3.What would you contribute to the cohort and to the Imperial community?

More and more people prefer to read e-book rather than paper books. What are the reasons for this? What problems can this cause for libraries?

the plants below show a public park when it first opend in 1920 and the same park today.