The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is common sense that cigarettes’ harmful effects on health are known by everyone, but

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obsession cannot break down easily and is still widely consumed throughout the world.

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essay will discuss the causes of

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addiction and provide some solutions that can lower its usage. There are many reasons behind

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bad habit, including

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calming effect is considered as the way to let go of stress and its cheap

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and relatively weak legal enforcement.

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, even there is a law that prohibits to

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cigarettes

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to underage teens (21 years old, many cassiers disobey the law and sell them to high school students. Another factor is, due to the cheap

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, everyone can purchase it from everywhere and can smoke wherever they want. There are a plethora of solutions that can tackle

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issue including increasing its'

price

, introducing new legislation that eliminates the usage of cigarettes, and increasing awareness of the public regarding its health deterioration by creating content.

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the government should triple the current import taxation of tobacco which is the main source of cigarettes.

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, it cannot be consumed a great deal.

Secondly

, there must be strict legislation rolled out that prohibits smoking inside public and private buildings,

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, schools and kindergarten environment. Unless

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law is obeyed, the amount of penalty should be much higher than the current implication.

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but not least, the reminder of its' side effect on health must be everywhere like ads, from bus stop banners to flayers that stick on walls. In conclusion, due to

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, and poor legislation, the cigarette is consumed greatly in every corner of the world, to tackle

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issue there needs to be some new legal

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which introduces high taxation and impose smoking in buildings.