Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that making

boys

and girls

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study in

separated

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schools

will be more advantageous by some sort of public.

However

, others think

on the contrary

way and consider that studying in mixed

schools

will be better than compared to the

first

belief.

This

essay will discuss both of these views and give my own opinion below too. On the one hand, making children

to

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get knowledge in separated

schools

have extremely benefit sides. Because it protects youngsters interrupting their mindsets from observing

knowledges

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.

For instance

, it is

clearly

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that, in

type

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of isolated

schools

,

boys

and of course girls make somehow deep connections connected with love feelings with each other while studying jointly. So, being strongly in love will disorientate their main attention,

as a result

, their productivity and other skills automatically decrease.

In addition

, studying together not only causes to mentioned problems

,

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but

also

disposes to the rising of bullying. Because almost the whole

boys

want to show off their strengths and full power to their classmates

with

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fighting them in order to attract females.

On the other hand

, studying in mixed

schools

have it is own advantages as well. Because being in

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particular class with 2 genders help them to make connections and to learn how to communicate through genders related to their characters.

For example

, with having conversations

boys

and girls will automatically learn communicating with each other and it helps them to

be freely feel

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themselves in their own future.

Thus

,

this

side has

also

benefits. In my opinion, 2 beliefs have their own

advantageous

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and

diaadvantageous

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disadvantageous

. But it comes to me, I choose the letter idea that observing and learning how to communicate with other gender

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have

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really essential importance because our existing world not only consists

with

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males but half of them are

also

females.