Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money . Write a letter to the local council . In your letter Guve details of how you and your friends or family use the centre . Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community . Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to oppose closing a sports and leisure

centre

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. I believe that there is plenty of benefit for people around here. To start with, my family and I often go to the

centre

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like five times a week. Regarding

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this

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is the place where we can do some activities together,

for instance

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, playing badminton, jogging or even having a picnic.

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leisure

centre

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is essential to our community, to keep everyone in touch and to get to know each other better.

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, I have met lots of friends here, so we can share our problems, help each other or encourage them in a hard time. Closing the

centre

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might cause negative consequences to us,

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as lacking exercise or lacking communication between people here which could not only cause a physical health but

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mental health. I hope you consider the statement before making a decision. I look forward to your response. Yours Faithfully, X

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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162 words

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