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Industrial pollution is increasing all around the world. Some people say that the most effective way to tackle the problem is to tax companies that are causing the pollution. Other argue that there are other ways to control the situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There are a lot of ecological concerns in the world nowadays and one of the main of them is industrial pollution. It is no matter how many carriers we buy and how many
people
 use electric cars, industrial waste will always have a greater impact on the environment. Though some
people
 claim that the most effective method to curb the pollution raise is to increase the companies taxes, other
people
 believe that there are to be other ways to diminish
techical
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technical
 waste. I am going to consider both points of view in
this
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give my own opinion. On the one hand, the countries deprived of dirty industries have a better ecology and
life
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 conditions and are gradually becoming the aim for emigration high cultured
people
 over the world. But
this
 situation happened in the
second
 half of
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 because of the desire of big entrepreneurs to help nature but more of the intention to decrease the
tax
 pressure in their own countries.
As a result
, nowadays the majority of environmentally dirty companies are located in
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developing countries
such
 as Vietnam, Malaysia, India and others. Thanks to it we can observe the situation of ecological disaster on the many territories of them and the amount of pollution in the whole world has increased.
On the other hand
,
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industry is the basis of
modern
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 economy. Industrial enterprises create
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jobs for many
people
 and make
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 real part of
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 domestic product in every country. Due to
this
, we can not merely elevate industrial taxes in order to save our nature and to close manufacturing. The economy based only on services can not survive. Facilities manufacturing the real
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 are sustainably needed
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 every country.
However
,
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certain
tax
 adjustment must happen in order to make dirty factories disadvantageous and to encourage them to minimalize their waste.
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governments should foster recycling as
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 way to deal with existing landfills. In my opinion, the authorities should use the combination of methods in environmental battle and the
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one of them. They should not simply elevate the taxes in dirty areas of industry but should encourage the
enterpreneurs
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entrepreneurs
 to make their manufactories greeny by the way of
tax
 credits providing, recycling and implementation of
science
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 achievements.
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