One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

Road
obstruction due to severe
traffic
jam
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has been one of the major issues in most of the big towns.
Heavy
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inflow of
vehicles
without any controls and violation of
traffic
laws are among the top reasons that
causes
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congestion in most of the cities. Having said so, there are various ways to control
this
unfortunate situation. Loads of
vehicles
entering the city almost at the same
time
creates
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an
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jam-packed situation
in
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roads
,
specially
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in
morning
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and evening
time
.
Traffice
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Traffic
is caused mostly by school
vehicles
, personal
vehicles
and public busses as
these vehicle
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will enter the city at similar
timing
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every morning. Not following the
road
rules
is the
second
reason for obstructed
roads
in most of the metropolitans. Most of the breaches of
traffic
rules
are caused by narrow
road
system
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which is a common issue in
densly
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densely
populated cities. Knowing or unknowingly people tend to breach
traffic
rules
to reach their offices on
time
. Limiting
of
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traffic
inflows to the city is the
first
thing that authorities should be working on to reduce or control the congestion on
roads
at any point of the
time
. Suggesting people
to
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use public transport can be one solution that can limit the incoming
traffic
to the cities. Introducing light rails
which
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travels in elevated railway tracks
build
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over the concrete
coloms
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colours
can be another  easy way to eliminate heavy
traffic
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in
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roads
.
Further
broadning
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broadening
the
road
system is another alternative solution in reducing
road
obstruction and
traffic
violation. In
conclution
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conclusion
, we evidenced that congested
roads
are influenced by uncontrolled
traffic
inflows and violation of
road
rules
due to narrow
roads
.
This
situation can be eliminated by managing the incoming
traffic
and proposing people to use public transport.
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  • traffic congestion
  • urban population
  • public transportation
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • economic strength
  • consumerism
  • car ownership
  • commuting
  • peak hours
  • public transit
  • carpooling
  • ride-sharing
  • remote work
  • flexible working hours
  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion charges
  • traffic management systems
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