Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Disappearance
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of some types of
animal
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the animal
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together with
variety
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a variety
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of flora and fauna were mainly due to the
inbalance
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imbalance
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of
natural
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the natural
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system to the earth, caused by men and women.
Negative
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impact of globalization which may lead to
pollution
of
water
,
air
& sound, deforestation, loss of wild
animals
and global warming are among top causes that
ecovariety
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eco variety
deco variety
of the globe. As
such
there are
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numerous
ways of protecting
the
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animals
and nature. Increase
volues
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volumes
of transportation, heavy uses of natural resources, interconnections across
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borders
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boarders
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borders
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due to globalization has been the main reason for
air
,
water
and sound
pollution
which leads to threatening
of
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the continuity of the world natural ecosystem and causing destruction or death to some of the valuable creatures on earth. Damaged to
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ozone
layer,
pollution
of
sea
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seawater
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water
, polluted
air
in metropolitan cities are
few
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a few
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examples caused by globalization.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
deforestation has been the main influencer in global warming which is again a severe risk that people and
animals
will have to face in near future. Protective actions to preserve the bio-diversity can be started by limiting the transportation both by sea and
air
to reduce the
pollution
to
air
,
water
and sound. Recently we evidenced that
damaged
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to
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the Ozen
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layer was self repaired due
limited
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to limited
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or no travelling by
air
and sea
as a result
of
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the pandemic
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situation which prevailed in 2020/2021 due to COVID-19. Limiting
of
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fossil
fuel
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fuels
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and encouraging renewable energy sources
such
as solar power and electricity can not only improve the
air
quality, but it will
also
limit the resources
exshaution
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exhaustion
in
world
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. In
conclution
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conclusion
, it should be
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mentioned
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that
humen
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human
activities
has
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an
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direct impact
in
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on
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continuity
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the continuity
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of
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wildlife
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wild life
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wildlife
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and
disappearance
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the disappearance
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of some of the
animals
from
the
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globe. Having said so, there are ways that people can still protect or control the negative impacts caused by their activities to the
ecovariety
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eco variety
deco variety
of the planet.
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  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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