Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

Sometimes some sort of children
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different
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. In
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their childhood times.
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,
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and surely consequences of
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style. On the one hand, parenting their youngsters in
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technique
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extremely beneficial. Because if they grow up in
this
method
, they tend to be strong-opinion part of in their community.
For instance
, some kind of population who cultivate in
this
parenting system
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stand strongly on their personal conclusions and will not allow others to replace it.
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they tend to gain huge success in the fields connected with managing lots of staff
such
as entrepreneurs because of their characteristic features connected with their mindset.
On the other hand
, it has it is disadvantageous sides as well. The
first
and almost foremost negative side is connected with
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bossy characters that they
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across with difficulties to interact with
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in their child times and in the future too.
Thus
, these introverted characters will be it is the worst side of
this
parenting
method
.
In addition
, as mentioned above that with hardly standing on their own opinions, they will not listen to others even if their conclusions are right.
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a lot of difficulties and
further
unsolvable issues. To sum up, parenting children in
this
style has it is own benefits and
also
disadvantages. The best advantages are that they hardly stand on their own ideas and do not listen to others.
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not
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them can be
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and their introverted character can
also
be their negative side.
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  • indulgent
  • entitlement
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • nurturing
  • self-reliance
  • adversity
  • autonomy
  • validation
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