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Describe how instant noodles are manufactured. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write 150 words

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The diagram below shows the full action of how instant noodles will be produced. Overall, what can
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 seen is that
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 instant noodles are manufactured with consist of 8 varieties of stages from storage silos
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 the labelling
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To begin
 with, the mechanism begins with storage silos from arriving with the flour car model. After having storage, it arrives in the mixing process by adding oil and water before having both dough sheets and strips. After completing these steps,
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 they are directed automatically to the fifth step called Noodles Discs. After
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 they are met with the cooking stage with oil and the drying stage too. Finishing
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 process they are put into cups and sent to add vegetables and spices as well. In the
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 process, they are met with labelling and sealing stages in order to be prepared to put them into labels. After finishing all of these mentioned processes Instant
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