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Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years it has become more and more popular for
people
 to shop for their needs and wants on the internet.
This
 may be because most
people
 prefer shopping from the comfort of their homes rather than going in person to the actual shops.
However
, there are some drawbacks to
this
. In
this
essay
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 I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages
about
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 shopping online. One advantage of online shopping would be that at
this
 time of the year with covid and so on it is much safer for
people
 to shop online to protect themselves from the recent outbreak of covid 19. Another point about shopping online would be that you would have a wide variety of
products
 and discounts on all the
products
 so it will be easier to find the
product
 that you want. My final point on shopping online would be that while shopping online
it
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saves you loads of time to get more and more stuff done rather than going to multiple stores to get different
products
.
On the other hand
, online shopping can lead to multiple cases of fraud because most
people
 would input their credit card details on sketchy websites
and
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 would result in
the
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hackers stealing their money from their bank accounts.
In addition
, a delay
on
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 the arrival date of their
product
 could result in the
product
 arriving way after the initial date. My
last
 point to consider
,
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 would be that you would not be able to see the
product
 on whether it's good or not so you would receive the
product
 and realise that
this
 isn’t what you
initially
 wanted. To sum up, online shopping can have a negative impact on buyers, but it
also
 has many advantages. Personally, I think that online shopping saves precious time that we all need in our busy lives and you have a wider range of
products
 to choose from.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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