Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?
Several representatives of contemporary society deem that multicultural communities give the benefits, rather than flaws to areas. From my perspective, it cannot be denied that
this
statement is composed of a fraction of the truth. Therefore
, I am going to reflect on this
essay my own view of such
an issue and to provide strong arguments, which confirm my opinion.
To sum up, having made these points, it is true that such
a tendency incurs criticism. In my opinion, if multicultural communities are employed for the right purposes, their benefits overweight their drawbacks undoubtedly.Submitted by sunsistem123 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite