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It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#children #vegetables #animals
A few folks of our community emphasize
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 the present curriculum of
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 process. They believe that it is essential for youngsters to learn about cultivating vegetables and managing a livestock farm. Whereas the rest of the individuals deem it as
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 of time for children, which can hamper their academic
gowth
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growth
now
gown
. In
this
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 and disadvantages of learning horticulture and keeping animals and express my opinion towards the end. On the one hand,
aquiring
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acquiring
 skills of producing raw food and animal harvesting can make the
next
 generation more self-reliable in any situation.Adverse situations are un-
forseeable
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foreseeable
 and
equiping
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equipping
adoloscents
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adolescents
 with
this
 knowledge can increase their chance of survival immensely.
In addition
 to that,
On the other hand
, indulging in
this
 learning process can lead to lower academic performance and can
also
 endanger the
life
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 of children. In our modern era,
life
 is a race, one has to exceed in school
life
 to get into universities and to achieve their professional goals. wasting their precious time
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such
activites
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activities
 can cause lower grades which can be devastating for them.
Moreover
, Animals are
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 and can act in
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 manner. So, leaving young ones near them can lead to
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 of
previous
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 human
life
. In my opinion, The disadvantages are far more concerning than the predicted advantages. Children are naive and are not capable enough to ensure their own safety or to handle large
cattles
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battles
cattle
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cow
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 by themselves. To conclude,
although
, there are a few positive outcomes of it.
however
, they are not enough to persuade society to overlook the demerits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable practices
  • cultural literacy
  • hands-on experience
  • nutritional awareness
  • curriculum integration
  • time management
  • resource allocation
  • school gardening projects
  • animal husbandry
  • ecosystem education
  • dietary habits
  • work ethic
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