You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue till late night.Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter: explain what will be happening offer your apologies in advance invite him/her to visit your house someday

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Dear Mr Aman, I am writing

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missive to let you know that on 26th march 2022 i.e on Sunday I am going to throw a graduation party at my home and the event will start from 5:00 pm onwards and it may go up to 11:00 pm.

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,I have started decorating my garden as the gathering would be around 25-50 members.So the garden has ample space where we can gather together and enjoy our special day.Continental food has been arranged.Apart from

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dj system has been set up for more fun. Please accept my apologies in advance for the disturbance that may be caused to you for the music that would be played in our garden.Though,I will personally monitor the sound of the music and I will make sure that it may not went load. I will be greatful if you join the moment along with Shivam.I have

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invited Mr singh family.

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my family will

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be present in the party.

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you will never feel bored as there are two families to accompany you.Please note the timings it will start from 5:00 pm onwards followed by dinner at 7:30 pm. Give my regard to uncle and aunt Your faithfully, Haman

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

202 words

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